WOW. just... wow. that was great on so many levels. complex plot that worked perfectly. wide cast of characters, all well written. LOVE john, so quietly heartbroken and trying to figure out wat the right thing to do is.
so many little touches that were great, I'm sure my despicable memory has lost track of many, but.. sam and jack as fosterers (g). alpha being john because she was thinking of him. the whole scene when john finds her. baby elizabeth and john (awwwww)
the way his love is everywhere, without ever needing to be said. oh! and your explanation for the hug! kudos!
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Date: 2008-03-09 06:22 pm (UTC)complex plot that worked perfectly. wide cast of characters, all well written. LOVE john, so quietly heartbroken and trying to figure out wat the right thing to do is.
so many little touches that were great, I'm sure my despicable memory has lost track of many, but.. sam and jack as fosterers (g). alpha being john because she was thinking of him. the whole scene when john finds her. baby elizabeth and john (awwwww)
the way his love is everywhere, without ever needing to be said. oh! and your explanation for the hug! kudos!