I love this. I love the pacing of this, it gains momentum and rolls forward with sheer awesome. I love how John's a huge dork. I love how everyone was in loops while he played it out. I love how she slaps him at the end for being a dork but kisses him all the same. Much love.
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Date: 2009-01-10 09:21 am (UTC)